The Chance Meeting Sketch

Feel free to offer your comments for my entry, Stiff Job.

I thought there was a lot to like about this video. I liked the absurdity of the back and forth banter. One could argue that it was too long and, no doubt, it could stand to be tightened up, but having it go on for an uncomfortable amount of time plays to the style as well. The biggest detractors to me were the photography and editing. Some of the shots were awkwardly framed and the editing was rough. Having the sound of overhead airplanes in half the shots of a dialogue is distracting. Also there were sound effects for the punches and slaps but not the kicks. Maybe that was a choice. Many of these issues will be overcome with more practice of shooting and editing. Not everyone will appreciate this style of comedy. Possible influences that come to mind are Woody Allen, Tom Stoppard, and Monty Python but I don't really know what I'm talking about. It's a solid entry, though not without its issues. Keep it up, I look forward to your round two entry.

are you flamming serious? this was crap.