Planetary Dialogue

Round 2 Rank in Sketch: 15th

The Venus De Milo of sketch comedy might be in there somewhere, but all I really see is a big hunk of concrete.

Round 2 Rank in Sketch: 10th

I like the idea, but it way too long to get to it. Similarly, the different beats to the game were all funny, but were too long and drawn out. This should be 3 minutes long; don't be afraid to kill your babies.

Round 2 Rank in Sketch: 17th

I think you can re-draft the script a couple more times before you start shooting. There are some good elements here, but you need to be much, much tighter.